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在上一篇文章中,小编就考研英语写作常见的错误已经为各位考生从宏观方面分享过一部分。今天 ,小编就考研英语写作部分易出现的基础的错误和众位考生分享一下 。

1)主谓一致是考生必须在写作中要注意到的部分,例如:

误:Anumberofboystudentsisfootballfans.

正:Anumberofboystudentsarefootballfans.

误:Thenumberofthestudentsinthisschoolhavebeenincreasingtheseyears.

正:Thenumberofthestudentsinthisschoolhasbeenincreasingtheseyears.

误:Theconstructionofthetwonewrailwaylineshavebeencompletedbynow.

正:Theconstructionofthetwonewrailwaylineshasbeencompletedbynow.

主谓一致中的就近一致,例如:

误:Therearearubberandtwopencilsinthebox.

正:Thereisarubberandtwopencilsinthebox.

误:Thereisawidevarietyofpeopleontheearth.

正:Thereareawidevarietyofpeopleontheearth.

2)时态语态 ,在不同的写作要求中,文章时态的使用必须要谨慎。

描述图画应该用进行时:

误:Asisshowninthepicture,therearetwohandicappedindividualsbindtheirdisabledlegstogetherandholdfasttoeachother’sshoulders,withtheircrutchesleftbehindeachother.

正:Asisshowninthepicture,therearetwohandicappedindividualsbindingtheirdisabledlegstogetherandholdingfasttoeachother’sshoulders,withtheircrutchesleftbehindeachother.

描述图表应该用过去时:

误:Asisillustratedbythechart,mobile-phonesubscriptionnumberisincreasingto8timesfrom2000to2008.

正:Asisillustratedbythechart,mobile-phonesubscriptionnumberincreasedto8timesfrom2000to2008.

误:Thisbarchartindicatesdifferentmarketsharesofautomobilesofthreetypesofbrandbetween2008and2009.In2008,carswithJapanesebrandstopthethreetypesofvehicles,accountingfor35%ofthemarket.Theyearsof2009haswitnessedahugechangethatChinesebrandshit32%oftheautomarket,whilecarswithJapaneseandAmericanbrandstake25%and15%ofthewholemarketrespectively.

正:Thisbarchartindicatesdifferentmarketsharesofautomobilesofthreetypesofbrandbetween2008and2009.In2008,carswithJapanesebrandstoppedthethreetypesofvehicles,accountingfor35%ofthemarket.Theyearsof2009haswitnessedahugechangethatChinesebrandshit32%oftheautomarket,whilecarswithJapaneseandAmericanbrandstook25%and15%ofthewholemarketrespectively.

在预测趋势的文章中,需要用一般将来时:

误:Ibelievethentherelationshipbetweenpeopleisharmoniousandoursocietyisabetterplaceforusinthefuture.

正:Ibelievethentherelationshipbetweenpeoplewillbeharmoniousandoursocietywillbeabetterplaceforusinthefuture.

3)可数名词与不可数名词 ,名词的单复数,例如:

误:Largequantitiesoffoodhavebeenstoredforthewinter.

正:Largequantitiesoffoodhasbeenstoredforthewinter.

误:Generally,students’innermotivationwithhighexpectationsfromothersareessentialtotheirdevelopment.(is)

正:Generally,students’innermotivationwithhighexpectationsfromothersisessentialtotheirdevelopment.

4)介词搭配,例如: 

误:Mrs.Smith’swalletwasstolenofonherwayhome.

正:Mrs.Smith’swalletwasstolenfromheronherwayhome.

Mrs.Smith’swalletwasrobbedofheronherwayhome.

误:Formypart,Iagreetothelatteropinionforthefollowingreasons.

正:Formypart,Iagreewiththelatteropinionforthefollowingreasons.

误:Weagreedtoleavingtherethenextday.

正:Weagreedonleavingtherethenextday.

5)单词大小写及拼写错误 ,在写作中,题目的大小写(除冠词、连词和介词外,其他词原则上都应该第一个字母大写);例如:

误:Humanneedsandwants

正:HumanNeedsandWants

误:Hesaid,“heisgoingtoShanghainextweek”.

正:Hesaid,“HeisgoingtoShanghainextweek ”.

6)专有名词(人名 ,地名 ,书名)和缩写字母要大写;头衔在专有名词前要大写,在专有名词后则小写;例如:

误:Captionsmith

正:CaptionSmith/Smith,thecaptain

误:IamwritingtorecommendyoutoreadWealthofNationsfortheclubreadingsessions.

正:IamwritingtorecommendyoutoreadWealthofNationsfortheclubreadingsessions.

7)分清及物动词与不及物动词,例如:

误:HearrivedParisthedaybeforeyesterday.

正:HereachedParisthedaybeforeyesterday.

8)被动语态与主动语态 ,例如:

误:Thequestionishardtobeunderstood.

正:Thequestionishardtounderstand.

9)词类混淆,将动词或形容词误作名词用,将名词或动词误作形容词用等。例如:

误:It'sbecomingdifficultytorememberthingsforher.

正:It'sbecomingdifficulttorememberthingsforher.

误:Therewasnodifficultinpersuadingher.

正:Therewasnodifficultyinpersuadingher.

10)冠词 ,情态动词,介词,代词等方面的应用 ,例如:

误:Favorableattitudetothelifecanbroadenourexperienceandenhanceourvigorthentocreateaenthusiasticenvironmentforoursociety.

正:Favorableattitudetothelifecanbroadenourexperienceandenhanceourvigorthentocreateanenthusiasticenvironmentforoursociety.

误:Asaresult,theycanpaidfortheexpensetodothatkindofthings.

正:Asaresult,theycanpayfortheexpensetodothatkindofthings.

11)标点符号,写文章时,切忌从头到尾只用逗号的现象 ,每完成一句话,需要正确的使用标点符号来标注出 。同时也要注意正确使用逗号和分号。例如:

误:Somepeopleusethecomputertohelpthemtocompletetheirwork,suchasthetankworkers,whilesomepeopleusethecomputertoplaygames,forexample,someoldpersonliketoplaygameoncomputer.
正:Somepeopleusethecomputertohelpthemtocompletetheirwork.Suchasthetankworkers.Whilesomepeopleusethecomputertoplaygames.Forexample,someoldpersonliketoplaygameoncomputer.

在这篇文章中,小编从具体的方面着手 ,整理了11种考研写作易出现的基础错误。这些错误体现着一个考生综合的英语知识及能力 。一篇优秀的考场作文时绝对不可以出现这样基础的错误。这些错误的出现会影响到写作部分的分数。因此 ,小编建议各位考生,在平时复习2016考研英语写作的过程中,把自己经常出现的基础错误记录下来 。在不断改进这些错误的过程中 ,相信各位考生的英语综合能力也会有很大的进步。

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