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一 、文章结构用词表达
1.分点一:分层论证
Basictoanyunderstandingofthebenefitswecangetfrom_______isthat__________/Firstandforemost;
Ononehand_________,Ontheotherhand_________;
Besides/What’smore/Inaddition;
Firstofall/tobeginwith/aboveall;
Inthesecondplace/inthesecondinstance;
Lastbutnotleast/insummary;
这一段主要说理,在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节 ,重点是要用一些精华句子!
2.分点二:举例论证
Furtherlendingcredencetomypositionisthat____________(简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话)
/Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationthantheexampleof(典型例子)
/Acaseinpointisthat(不是很典型)________,…..someexpertpiontsoutthat...
/take...ininstance...
/accordingtotheinvestigationconductedthisyearindicatesthat.../(推荐,为神马,因为句子长 ,废话多……)
somestatisticsexposethat...
一句话总结例子:Asaresult,强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样 。
3.让步段:
Agreeordisagree:Admittedly,_____,tosomeextent,maydirectlyorindirectly____/hasitsundeniabledetriments.
Forinstance,_______
However,thevaluablemeritsof_______considerablyovershadowthedrawbacks/onnoaccount________./
(经典正反对比结构)
二选一:Admittedly,BBalsohascertainmeritswhichdeservesomewordshere.Forexample,____(字数不够就多讲点)
However,BB的缺点或AA也可以做到.ComparedwithAA,(which可以总结所有优点或针对BB的一方面,)itpales.
4.结尾段:
Therefore,duetotheabovementionedreasons,whichsometimescorrelatewitheachothertoformanorganicwholeandthusbecomemorepersuasivethananysingleoneofthem(字不够了用),Ireinforcemystandpointthat.
5.改写题目
Onlyvia(by/through/with/when/after)___canwe__________;
onlyvia(by/through/with/when/after)___canwe________;
andonlyvia(by/through/with/when/after)___canwe_______
Or
ItisAthat...;itisAthat...;anditisAthat...(不好写或显得累赘就不要了)
二、语言结构用词表达
1.基本句型
A.因果
Onaccountof/owingto/dueto+N
Forthereasonthat/as/since+句子
Itisdueto____that
eg:Itisduetohispersistenceandperseverancethatheeventuallyreachedhisacme.(强调句)
derive/arise/stemfrom来源于
eg:Hissuccessderivesfromhispersistenceandperseverance.
ascribeAtoB归结于
eg:Hissuccesscanbeascribed/attributedtohispersistenceandperseverance
B.条件
AservesasacatalystforB(ourfurthersuccess)
If/onconditionthat/providedthat/aslongas________
C.让步
Despitethefactthat/regardlessof
2.经典句型
A.倒装
Onlyvia(by/through/with/when/after)__do/did/canwe__
eg:OnlyaftergoingtothebeachofHawaiiwillIknowaboutAmericantypicaltypeofspendingleisuretime.
Hardly/Seldom/Scarcelycan__
eg:Hardlycanweimagineaworld/ourlifewithout/devoidof
So+adj+主谓倒装+that__
Notonly主谓倒装butalso...
eg:Notonlyshouldeducationpreparechildrentocompete
Notonlydopeoplecaretheireconomicneeds,theybutalsowanttomeettheirspiritualneeds.
Onnoaccount主谓倒装(决不....)
.
B.强调
Itis/was....that/who(m)....
限定性副词probably/directlyorindirectly/tosome(alarge)extent
3.经典中的经典
A.排比
1)Itistourismthatgivesmetheopportunitytoknowthecultureofthisdynamic,robustandalivecountry.
2)Itiscomputersthatmakeourlifediverse,convenient,dynamic/vibrant,withoutwhichourlifewouldprobablypale.
3)A/whichneedstobe/Inthisway,Acanbereadilyaccepted,respected,appreciatedandadvocated.
4)Onlyviauniversityeducationcanwehavesystematicknowledgeconcerningartsandscience.
Onlyviauniversityeducationcanweknowtheessenceofsymbiosisandcollaboration.
AndOnlyviauniversityeducationcanwemeetthedemandsofsocietyandmakeourfuturesuccessinevitable.
三、作文中的部分新颖表达及部分垃圾词汇的替代
作文中想要拿到高分,就必须有一些与众不同的词汇或表达方式 ,笔者在这里所说的“垃圾词汇”并没有贬低这些表达的意思,大家可以想象一个阅卷老师在阅几千份试卷的过程中就看到几千次相同表达,分数可想而知,所以如何取舍你懂的。
A 、认为(尽量避免的表达 ,以下例句同,不再重复说明:Ithink/Ibelieve/AsfarasIamconcerned)
1.别人认为:assume,argue,contend,maitain,holdtheperspectivethat…
2.我认为:Iaminclinedtotheviewthat…(开头引入自己观点)
convincedthat…
Iawarethat…(比较弱)
Iclingtoabeliefthat…
B、不同人有不同看法(Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions)
People’sperspectivedivergeonthiscontroversialissue.
Thereisnoconsensusamongpeopleconcerningthiscontroversialissue.
C、举例(forexample/forinstance/letmegiveyouanexample)
1.Afitting/telling/apt/strikingexampleisthat…
2.Acaseinpointisthat…(口语常用)
3.Furtherlendingcredencetomypositionistheexampleof…(***倒装)
4.Thiscanbeaptly/wellexemplifiedandillustratedbythecaseof+n.
thefactthat+句子
thefollowingcase
5.Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationthantheexampleof…,who….(***最高级)
6.Whenitcomestomusictalent,eminentindividualsrangingfromMozarttoBeethvoencomeimmediatelytome.(***此处也是细节)
7.Toillustratethis,weneednolookfurtherthanthecaseof……(举例)
8.Imagine/Visualize/Picture/Suppose……
D 、迷恋,喜欢 ,上瘾(少用具体多用抽象)
Iaminvariablyfascinated/captivated/enchantedwith/by…
HardlycanIresistthetemptationofsth.
beobsessedwith/by…
.
E、数据引用
Statisticfiguresshow/manifestthat…
.
Manysurveys/investigations显示that越来越多的universitieshave重视thecreditsystem,whichpeobablywould带来不好的呃影像.(中文从一下中选词)
显示:manifest/illustrate
重视:placeagreat/considerableemphasison
attachgreatimportanceto(不用换词)
onnoaccountcansb.ignore/turnablindeyetosth.(***倒装)
越来越多的:aincreasingnumber
带来不好影:exerciseanunpredictable/unforseableconsequence(不好的结果都用这个)upon
F、正反论证
Itisnotdifficulttoimaginethatif……
Itismoderntechnologythatmakesourlifesimple,healthyanddynamic/vibrant/fantastic/active/alive,withoutwhichourlifewouldprobablypale.
HardlycanIimaginetheworldwithoutthefascinationof……which……
G、然而(引出事物的反面)
onthecontrary/
conversely/
bycontrast
H 、利弊及其影响
利:merits/benefits/advantage
弊:drawbacks/risks/disadvantage
弊:
exerciseanunforseableandunprediactable/adverse/unfavorable/deleteriousconsequenceon…
undoubtedlyandundeniablysoundanalarmtosb.
putaenormouspressureupon
putapotentialandprobablethreaton…
adverselyaffect…
undermine
利:
1.exerciseafar-reachinginfluenton…
2.…undoubtedlyservesasacatalyst/enzymefor…
3.playa(n)irreplaceable/crutial/indispensablerolein…
4.layasolidfoudationfor…
“Asitvividlyshowninthepicture,...... ”相信大家对这句话都不会不熟悉吧?为什么所谓的模版用了会分数很低呢?
一、因为全国人民都在用它。二、大家都在用的话就看不出考生的真实水平了 。三 、阅卷老师一遍又一遍的看难道不会烦?
所以,这就是为什么用模版分数低的原因,也是为什么阅卷老师看到模版不愿意给分的一个因素。
而笔者这里所给出的并非纯粹的模版 ,而是在简单模版的基础上的更为新颖的表达方式,对于所谓模版,的确 ,用的人多了,老师就烦了,所以我们必须时刻自己总结出新颖的东西来避免。
而其中的方式之一就是使用更为高级的词汇和表达方式 ,说实话吧,在笔者的这个总结里,大部分的表达是雅思和托福作文表达,这样就能有效避免表达方式的雷同和词汇的陈旧 。
写了这么相信大家应该能理解我想表达的意思 ,模版,没有统一的,没有固定不变的 ,只有不断更新和不断总结的新颖表达方式和词汇,这样的模版才是真正实用和能拿高分的模版。
最后,祝福大家都能运用好这个所谓的“模版”里的表达方式 ,在写作中拿下高分。
垃圾词汇的替代
1:help
典型例句:I"llhelpyou。
替代语accommodate/assist/avail
E.g:I"llendeavourtoaccomodateyou 。
2:helpful
典型例句:Sthishelpful(tosb)
替代语conducive/time-honored时代赋予的/docredittoourforbears继承先辈的优秀传统/assisting
E.gSthisconducivetosb
3:show
典型例句:asitshowsinthepicture
替代语betray
4:think
典型例句:ithink--------
替代语deem
5:ugly
典型例句:xxxisugly
替代语hideous
6:bytheway
典型例句:bytheway,...
替代语incidentally....
7:because
典型例句:xxxbecausexxx
替代语inthat/inasmuchasE.g:xxxbecausexxx
8:consider
典型例句:Wemustconsiderxxx
替代语allowforE.g:Wemustallowforxxx
9:much
典型例句:therehasbeenamuchincreaseintheworldpopulation
替代语therehasbeenadrasticincreaseinthe-----
10:about
典型例句:itisabout250timesofthat
替代语itisapproximately---
11:buy
替代语purchase
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