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本文主要内容为第三段写作及结尾部分的写作框架 。
解析:第三段与结尾部分是整篇文章的总结部分,对于整体来说有点睛和提分的作用。本文提供的框架也分为负向文章行文思路与正向文章行文思路两大类 ,第三段的总结与提升主要从两个层面(社会层面与个人层面)来分析。
一 、第三段开头可以用到的过渡句:
Whatshouldwedotorelease/fixtheproblem?
Arethereanyrecommendationstosolvetheproblem?
Howtocurethepressingsituation?
Whatshouldwedoatpresent?
+Theansweristhatallhandsarerequiredto(solvethepressingproblem/improvethesituation.
二、负向文章行文思路:
1、社会层面
(1)中央地方共同努力
Thelocalofficialsshouldresorttothelawtoregulate(environmentalconservation).Besides,thecentralgovernmentisnotsupposedtohandablankchecktothelocalandshouldbepartiallyinvolvedin(curbingthelocaltaintedenvironment).
stategovernment
(2)政府立法听民意
Ourgovernmentshouldresorttothelawtoregulate(thestandardofproductquality)andshalllistentopublicopinionsanddemandswhenformulatinglaws,regulationsandpoliciesrelatingto(qualityofproduct)
foodsecurity/safety
(3)政府直面问题,听民意,平衡两者关系
Ourgovernmentshouldnotsugarcoat(cover)theproblembutlistentopublicopinionsanddemandswhenformulatinglaws,regulationsandpoliciesrelatingto(09-网络远近theInternet)and
trytojuggle(theuseofnetworkandthesupervisiononit/controloverit)
trytobalancebetween(theuseofnetworkandthecontroloverit)
juggleAandB
unfavorableinformation
balancebetweenAandB
(4)学校提供相关教育
Ourcollegesaresupposedtoprovidetrainingandcourseforstudentstolearnhowtojuggle(03溺爱孩子theirphysicaldevelopmentandpsychologicalmaturity/13选择theirstudyatschoolandinternship
outsidethecampus/offcampus)oncampus
(5)学校组织
StudentUnionshouldstart/kickoffcampaign,bothinsideandoutsidethecampus(bothonandoffcampus),toeducatepeoplethat(06追星--chasingidolduringtheyouthshouldbeproperlyhandledbytheirparents.)
(6)媒体
Mediacanbroadcastlesscommercialsandmorepublicserviceadvertisements
tocallonparentsto(03溺爱parenttheirchildrenproperly)
topromotetheawarenessof(03溺爱rightparenting)
2、个人层面
(1)有问题找家长和辅导员
Ouryounggenerationshouldturntoourstudentsupervisorsandparentsforrecommendationsabout
howto(balancebetweeninternshipandacademyfortheirfuturecareer.)
howtopromotetheirawarenessof()
howtostrengthentheirbeliefthat()
(2)积极投入活动
Weshouldtakepartintothecampaigntopromotetheawarenessof()andfulfillouraccountabilityasamemberofourcommunity.
(3)啥都做
Nomatterhowmuchfundthatourgovernmentwouldputinto(therecoveryoftaintedregion),wewillneversee(acleanskyorbreathfreshair)ifeffortoftheyounggenerationwereabsent.Althoughnotfinanciallyindependent,ourcollegestudentsmustbedoingeverythingwecantofulfillourdutytotakepartintotheimprovementofourcommunity.
3 、负向文章行文思路结尾:
Witheffortsfromallwalksoflife,itiscertainthatthesituationwouldgetimprovedsoon.
三、正向文章行文思路(积极倡导):
(Confidence)ispartiallythedrivingforcebehindtheevolution/growthofoursociety.Andallhandsaresupposedtojointogetherto(fosterpeople’sconfidence).
1、社会层面
(1)媒体传递正能量media
Themassmediashouldexertmorepositiveenergy,suchasbeingconfidence,tothepublicsothatpeoplewouldreactmorepositivelytodifficultiesandadversities.
(2)教育education
Education,affectspeople’sattitudeandreactiontotheworld.Thus,moraleducationshouldbeenhancedandconcentratedonjuvenilesandkidsbeforetheyentertheiradulthood.Specifically,self-disciplineandcodeofsocialconductshouldbewritteninbooksandcarefullydiscussedinclass.
(3)学校college
Collegeiswhereundergraduatesobtainknowledgeandskillstoenhancetheiracademicperformanceandwherestudentsgettheirpersonalityandcodeofsocialconductimprovedaswell.Thus,moralcourseofmoraleducationshouldbeprovidedaselectivecurriculumstocollegestudents.
curriculum校内课程
extracurriculum课外活动
electivesn选修课electivecurriculums
2 、个人层面
(1)改善自我
①Readingbooks.Wecandevotesomeofourleisuretocultivatingaloveofreadingbooks.Youwillfindwhatyoucannotgetinrealitybutinbooks,suchascompanion,answerstotoughquestions,etiquetteaswellasmentalpoweretc.
suchas+N/doing
forexample,+句子
②Exercising.Pollsconductedonlinesays,takingpartintosportswouldimproveyourmentality,personalityandstrengthenyourweakpoint.Yourwillfindyourselfmoreassertiveanddecisiveafteroneyearofgroupexercising.
findoneself+adj
findoneself+doingsth
③+给予他们时间成长Ofcourse,wecannotgrowtobe(aconfidentperson)overnightifwewerenot,therefore,weshouldallowourselvestotakebabystepstolearnit.
(2)志愿工作voluntarywork
Itishighlyrecommendedthatpeopleshouldparticipateinvoluntarywork.Duringtheprocess,youwouldgetyourmindpurified,moralconsciousnessboosted,andsocialresponsibilitiesstrengthened.Youwouldliketojoinhandswithyourpeersorcolleaguestoproceedwithyourtask.
getsthdone
3、正向文章行文思路结尾:
Iamdeterminedtosaythateffortanddevotionfromallhandswouldpromiseaprosperousandharmonioussociety.
Iamsurethateffortanddevotionfromallwalksoflifewouldensurethatoursocietymakearapidstridesinnearfuture.?
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