考研英语#2016考研究生英语#作文第二段的具体写作框架

本文主要内容为第二段写作。

解析：第二段为整篇作文非常重要的段落，是得失分的关键 。需要考生予以高度重视。下面介绍两种行文思路——负向文章行文思路和正向文章行为思路
。

一、负向文章行文思路：

负向文章行文思路主要是对话题的过渡 、分析与数据/举例支撑。

A、过渡部分：

方案一:

(现实中大家热议XX话题 。大家对此有不同的声音 ，但我…)Inreality,thesubjectabout+N/doingsthhaslongbeenabuzzinnetworkcommunity,thepublicaswellasthemedia.Thoughavarietyofvoicescanbeheard,

Itotallyopposethat+句子/(2005年——peopleturnablindeyetotheiragingparents)

Icannotagreemorewithyou.

Icannotopposemoreagainst+N/Itotallyagreethat+句子/(2001爱心：lovewouldbrightendarkness/lovewouldcastlighttothedarkandbrightenit.Wherelovewouldbe,itwilllightupgloom)

Ihighlyrecommendthatweshoulddiscouragepeoplefromdoingsth(97吸烟——discouragepeople,especiallytheyouth,fromsmoking)

Icannotagreemorewiththepointthat/(peopleareeasilyaddictedtosmokingandweshoulddiscouragethemfromdoingthat.)

方案二：

(图片反映的现象在快速发展中国各地区屡见不鲜，因此
，这值得所有人的关注)Infact,thephenomenonreflected/mirroredbythecartoontypicallyoccursinmanyparts/regionsofChina,whicharedevelopingwithbreakneckspeed,therefore,soitmeritsspecialattentionfromallwalksoflife.

方案三：

(这种情况值得大家关注
。我的意见是)Thissituation/problemdeservescarefulconcern/closeattentionfromallwalksoflife,especiallyouryounggeneration.Iwanttogivemyvoiceto
encouragesbto/supportthat/advocatethat(2003温室花朵——parentsshouldnotrelaxthedisciplineintheirfamilies/thinktwiceabouthowtoraisetheirkids.)

doteonsb溺爱

discouragesbfromdoingsth/putanendto(2003温室花朵——dotingontheirkids/givingtoomuchlovetotheirkids.)/stopdotingontheirkids./curb(限制)sth/check(限制)sth

B
、原因分析(2-3条原因)

原因分析又分为外因和内因。

外因：社会、政府 、媒体
、家庭、学校，

①法律缺失：

(问题是由法律不完善造成的)Thecurrentsituationisoftenplaguedbytheabsence(thelackof)ofrelativelegislation(立法)andlawenforcement

plaguen瘟疫 ，疾病v困扰

(当地政府没能填补xx方面的政策漏洞)Thelocalauthoritiesfailtoclose/fixloopholesinpoliciesconcerning(networkcommunity/waterpollution/dishonesty)

close/fixloopholes(漏洞)

②媒体massmedia

(媒体对民意影响力大
，媒体功能紊乱导致问题产生)Themediahasapowerfulinfluence/impactonpublicopinionandagreatdealofsocialconduct(socialconduct社会行为)canbeaffectedbythemassmedia.However,thedysfunction/malfunctionofthemediapartiallycausetheproblemthat(问题)+.一句话
(媒体对民意影响力大，不幸的是 ，她的功能紊乱部分地导致问题)Themassmediahasgreatinfluenceonpublicopinionviaradio,TVprogram,magazinesaswellasnewspapers.Unfortunately,itneglectstotakethatdutyandtherefore,leadstotheproblemthat+一句话

③学校college/university/school

business/medical/lawschool

(大学不应只提供课程
，还应提供训练去改善大学生的素质 。)College,acommunityofundergraduates,are/issupposedtonotonlyprovidelecturesandexperimentstoleveragetheiracademicperformance,buttrainingaswellascoursestoimprovetheirpersonalities.

(大学各团体应该发出声音
。但明显的，他们大多数时候都是沉默的大多数)SocietiesfromcollegeandStudentUnionshouldmaketheirvoicesheardbythewholesociety.Butevidently,theyaresilent/mutemajoritymostofthetime.

thedeafmute

majority成年人

minority未成年人

administrations/departments/authorities/institutionsconcerned:lacksupervision;insufficientmanagement

④家庭(父母)

(家长是孩子最好的老师。孩子如何面对世界取决于家长如何教育 。当家长忘了告诉他们的孩子该XX ，问题会发生
。)Parentsarechildren’sbestmentors.Howchildrenreacttotheworldislargelydetermined(决心
，确定，决定)byhowparentsparentandeducatetheirkidsintheirchildhood.Whenparentsforgettoletchildrenunderstandthat(句子),problemswould,beyondadoubt,comeup/popup忽然出现.

pop-up广告弹窗

popcorn

popmusic

Sbisdeterminedtodo

Tomisdeterminedtobeateacher.

Sbhasmadeupone’smindtodo

Ihavemadeupmymindtogetthrough/passtheexam.

(家教会影响孩子的身心发展 ，并部分决定了孩子是否有个好的性格。如果家长经常在情感和身体上离开孩子
，问题就出来了 。)Parenting,wouldaffectchildren’smentaldevelopmentandphysicalgrowth，evenpartiallydeterminewhetherheorshewouldhaveagoodpersonality.Whenparentsareoftenemotionallyabsentandevenphysicallyabsent,problemswouldpopup.

pricen价格v定价pricingn定价

parentn父母v教育parentingn家教

functionn作用 ，功能v起效，发挥功能

functioningn起效
，发挥功能

questionn问题v质疑

内因：意识(awareness 、consciousness)
、心态mentality，品质性格(人性personality)etiquette礼仪、道德(morality——aslashinmoralitymaycausecrashinsociety) 、责任感(accountability)
、
(这种行为失当不仅是由于不知道造成的 ，而往往是心态不正确造成的)价值观Inmostcases,thismisbehavior/pressingproblem/situationisnotsimplycausedbyignorancebutbyalackofawarenessof/lackofapropermentality/attitudethat+句子

(公共场合大声打手机是很失礼的)Talkingloudoverthephoneinpublicplacesisamajorbreachofetiquette.

amajorbreachofprinciples/rules/regulations

(人类逃避责任时
，问题就出现了)Whenindividuals，astinypartofsociety,skip/shrugofftheirresponsibilities/foldtheirarmstowardtheproblem/turnablindeyetothesituation,problemsarebondtocomeup/getpressing.

C、数据支撑：列举 、举例
、伪数据

05养老——AreportpublishedthisyearbytheChinaResearchCentreon(aging)forecasts/indicatesthatoverfortypresentofseniorsspendtheirlastyearslivingalone

06自信——Asurveyconcerning+Nconductedby/carriedoutbytheChinaResearchCentreon(successfulpeople、highachiever)shows/indicates/demonstrates/thatself-confidenceistheinstrument(方法 ，途径)oftheirachievement/accomplishment/success.

AistheinstrumentofB(N/doing)

06追星——Opinionpoll(民意调查)wasconductedbytheChinaResearchCenteron(也可以不写onsth)totest(tohowmuchdegree,peoplewouldbeaffectedbychasingidolsandnearly70percentofrespondentsadmittedthattheywastedtoomuchtimeandmoneychasingstars.

wastetime/moneydoingsth

(自身例子)OneofmyexperienceswouldfullyconvinceyouthatIamright.+例子
Factsspeaklouderthanwords.+例子/Ihadanexperiencejustlikethepictureindicates.

二 、正向文章行文思路：

正向文章的行文思路主要是意义分析+数据支撑+箴言
。

A：意义分析

以下是根据历年真题的作文话题例举出来的写作框架：

1、(健康——12乐观)N+wouldenhanceyouremotionalandspiritualwell-being.ArecentsurveycarriedoutbytheChinaResearchCenteronEmotiondemonstratesthatapersonwhois()tendstobemorepsychologicallyhealthyandhasalongerlifeexpectancy/lifespan.

Keepchinuptowardsyourfuture

makeyouagreatman

2
、(机会——13选择)N+wouldbringyoumoreopportunitieswhichdoesnotguaranteeyouachievementovernightbutmeanswhenadoorisclosed,moredoorsareopentoyou.Especiallyincurrenttightjobfair,apersonwhois()tendstowinmorejobinterviewsoverhisorheropponents.

winsthoversb

standoutfromsb

3、(提高个人素质——2004新起点)Beingreadyforchallengeallthetimemeansstrongself-disciplinewhichwouldcontributetotheimprovementofone’spersonalityandetiquettewhichwouldgetyouclosertoyourgoal.

getsbclosertogoal/dream

4 、(社交
，人际)()would,beyondadoubt,getyoumoresocial(善于交际)andthereforedeliveragreatcontributiontoenhanceyourinterpersonalskills,fosteryourleadership,andmakeyouamagneticperson/

strengthenpersonalcharisma(领导魅力).

5
、社会类话题可用到的作文框架：

helpdosth

helpsbindoingsth

(企业)()whichwouldhelpbuildafriendlyandhealthybusinessenvironmentthatwouldspurenterprisesonself-regulatingandproperlyoperating.

(良性竞争)()wouldencourageallenterprisestoparticipateintoafairplaywhichwouldbenefitbothindustriesandtheconsumers.

whichwouldleadtoawin-windeal/result

(全面建设小康社会)(AstherelationshipbetweenChinaandtherestoftheworldremainssteadyandstable),morevitalitywouldbeinjectedintothebuildingofawell-offsocietyinanall-roundway.
(社会发展平衡)Torunasocietyofharmony,governmentare/issupposedtojuggleequityandefficiencyand()would,withoutadoubt,helpfindbalancebetweenthetwo.

juggling’sone’slife

jugglev同时兼顾

theexchangeofculture

B、数据支撑：

1 、例证

ToexemplifywhatImean,Iwouldshareoneofmymemorableexperienceswithyou.

NothingcanexemplifymyviewpointbetterthanthesituationIoncewasconfrontedwith.

2011-旅游之余Toexemplifymyargument,Iamgoingtoexamine(审视)acase(inwhichaneatandclearresortisfavorableandpopularbytourists.)

2
、数据：data/figure/statistics

(1998年诚信)Datahasalwaysnoemotionandisconsideredneutral/impartialwhichwillneverhide/shadethetruth/reality.Accordingtoarecentpollon(),carriedoutbySina.com,
(percentofrespondents/participants/subjects)
onaverage,sixoutoftenrespondentswould(liketomakefriendswithhonestypersonanddobusinesswithcompaniesthatcarrygoodreputations.)

AoutofB

03溺爱——Figuresnevertellalie.Datathatispulledoutofresearchfindingsprovedthatmostsuccessfulpersonswerenotborninarichfamily.

(12自信)Averagepeoplelikecomfortable.Ifyoudonotwanttoendupwithordinarypeople,youshouldmakeyourownpath

(04起点)Lifeistooshorttobeaverage,andyoushouldprepareforchallengeallthetime

C、箴言：

Asanoldsayinggoes,(confidence)is(powerfulstrength)andittakesalifetimetofigureitout.

Astheproverbgoes,honestyisthebestpolicytowardlife.

Protectionisthebestattitudetowardnature.